Saturday, March 1, 2014

Essay #1 Polished Redraft

I approach working with students one-on-one by providing support and facilitating the writer’s growth in whatever areas and ways they consider most important to presenting their own unique voice. In working with student writers one-on-one, I constantly observe and make note of which methods I naturally gravitate to, what is helpful for different types of students and what I can do to tailor my recommendations in ways that benefit students most.
My approach to working with students serves my overall goal of providing a resource and a sense of support for the individuals I work with. Many students have a wide range of ideas and perceptions about tutoring, and I think the most productive, open and honest space is one where tutor and tutee have a good rapport and understand each other’s working styles. The way a student writes and interacts with me during tutoring sessions is directly related to their multi-faceted identity, and I strive to understand where students are coming from at all times. When a student is not being as forward or responsive as a tutor would like them to be, it is important to understand that they may have a number of reasons why that it is the case. Whether they are acting withdrawn, unresponsive or reacting defensively or emotionally to simple questions, we as tutors should realize that it may have nothing to do with the assignment or us as tutors.
I initially struggled with making a plan or agenda and only having one or two goals for that specific session. It seems as though this is not much of a plan at all, but in actuality, this is an efficient way to tackle something concrete and focus on the main points or high-priority aspects of an assignment. The plan seems simple, but it is a productive way to concentrate on the task at hand in an organized way.
Each tutor struggles with finding a balance between letting writers make their own decisions and voicing personal input without giving a directive. Being a supportive resource for students entails listening and qualifying their ideas. Though it is sometimes difficult to redirect students to more productive paths or ways of approaching assignments, Rafoth’s A Tutor’s Guide shows us that supportive tutors are constructive critics as well. When tutors err on the side of not giving enough instruction or recommendations, it can be problematic. Tutors need to set aside their own personal hesitations in order to better serve the student. When tutors embrace their own authority and acknowledge their own skills and usefulness, they can encourage the students’ own authoritative voice in positive ways to help them more effectively communicate through writing.
One of my strengths as a tutor is the way in which I am able to use “emotionally charged” topics or writings in order to get to know students better and build rapport. The first few sessions with a steady tutee provide a great opportunity. I enjoy getting to read students’ writing samples which touch on personal details and viewpoints, some of which I feel a connection to as well. One of my students let me know that as someone who is mostly interested in science, she struggles with writing and English classes, because there is not just one way to do anything. She also mentioned that she does well with writing when she feels personally connected to the topic. In my work with her, I try to help her see that this is a natural way to feel about writing, and it is simply about using every prompt and assignment to find some main idea, thesis or topic that you do connect with, and the writing can become that much easier to undertake, as well as more fulfilling. These types of assignments or prompts present one way in which writing about personal topics could have created an awkward or unpleasant situation for strangers, but I instead utilize our shared identities and common backgrounds to bond and hopefully help the student see that writing can be a powerful tool in giving voice to our valuable histories.
These types of personal writings are particularly helpful for me as a tutor towards my goal of getting to know students as much as possible. When you know where an individual is coming from, you can attempt to better approach their writing styles and ways of thinking. Personal narratives or writings help us to get to know each other’s individual perspectives, and utilizing this comfortable writing style, I can try to glean the most meaning from students who otherwise have trouble expressing their thoughts.
Tutors may feel an initial overwhelming feeling when a paper or writing is riddled with mistakes or when grammar is neglected to the point of a loss of clarity. For me, this was the case, because my immediate past few years have me coming from a professional environment where this level of writing is not a common issue. Also, writing and grammar have come easily to me since a young age. This being said, once tutors take a moment and reread students’ works, we are able to take a step back and remember that it takes practice to incorporate the complex rules of English grammar and mechanics into college-level or even everyday writing. We can get past our own self-imposed obstacles and strive to find meaning in the writing students present. I work with them to negotiate content and grammar by reading the writing aloud. I stop often to clarify with students and strive to help them create accurate representations of their ideas onto the paper. When I make markings, I provide reasoning behind my recommendations. Also, when I give feedback, I try to utilize supportive language like saying, “I noticed….” This type of response as a reader will likely prove more useful than approaching assignments with a teacher-like voice and style the whole time.
The small details and the mechanics of good writing will come with practice and feedback eventually. For this reason, I usually put my energy into finding, defining and creating meaning with students. Lessons in grammar can be learned over time when focusing on big picture meaning making, and my approach helps instill students with a sense of agency and a desire to grow that will eventually lead them to the goals I may not have the resources and time to cover in one session per week. I also work towards a style of writing that incorporates constant editing and reading back on the parts of both myself and the students. When students are able to revise their own work, they learn to see and address their own blind spots and work towards writing more perfect versions of their own lucid, coherent communication of thoughts.
            The three different ways of reading: assimilationist, accommodationist and separatist are also useful to understand when working with students. I was immediately drawn to this topic, because my own style of writing and tutoring has a tendency and temptation to be more assimilationist than it should be. Questioning and understanding our own methods gives us an awareness as tutors about the ways we approach situations and what adjustments we can make to correct our own work as well as students. By instead helping writers learn new discourse patterns without compromising the writer’s cultural and linguistic identity, I can more positively assist them. I also support and appreciate their style even if it’s “unconventional,” understanding that the best presentation of their thoughts may not come through a typical format that we’re used to seeing.
            These ideas also relate to my goal of avoiding appropriation, which can silence a writer’s unique voice. I avoid appropriation by being in constant communication throughout sessions about what the student wants to receive from our time together and what they think we should be working on. I also ask students whether my suggestions make sense to them instead of simply telling them what changes should be made. In conjunction with preserving the student’s own style of writing and level of language comprehension, I am helping them without appropriating their writing. Appropriation is understandably common for tutors and instructors, and this is the case because it is often the easiest route to take, at least on a short-term basis. It is tempting to simply give students the words or ideas that will finish the assignment soonest or make the writing easiest at the time, but working through these situations together is better for their long-term language skills and in preserving their unique writing styles.

            My approach to working with student writers one-on-one is rooted in my main goal of providing supportive, helpful assistance. I meet students where they are at, focus on main ideas and work to clarify their own messaging without inserting my own. By engaging in a conversation with students, I help them both identify trouble areas and most effectively confront these problems head-on. These methods avoid appropriation and work in more accommodationist and separatist ways that provide lasting tools for them to grow as successful writers.

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